This felt like a cry for help. Which it was supposed to, mind. The main character here, Melody Breeze is a desparate mare. That comes through very well. The thing is, the author's voice bleeds through a lot. Especially since comments are disabled (i.e. why I'm writing this as a blog). It feels very much like the author is also in need of help here. This is baseless speculation, understand, made with with absolutely no knowledge of said author. But it's the feeling I get from it. But, focusing

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